From now on we’ll try and keep up with this on a weekly basis. Promise!
Thanks to all who took part and promoted us last week, we had some brilliant stories and everyone deserves a big pat on the back. After much deliberation we chose the following featured writer:
Untitled by Elaine McKay
Without giving too much away, Elaine uses an interesting structure in this piece to convey a sense of tragedy and destruction through the removed point of view of a journalist/news reporter. What’s excellent about this piece is the deliberateness in the confusing narrative, and the way that once you’ve finished, it makes perfect sense. Thank you to Elaine for taking part again, and thanks for writing us a brilliant story, well done!
Please take a moment to read this story and leave Elaine some feedback.
If anyone wants to workshop their writing further and get more feedback, please join our CAKE.writers group on Scribophile. Scrib is free to join and provides a safe, friendly community to get feedback from a lot of different writers.