I know you all want to know who won last week’s Wednesday Write-in to become our 25th featured writer. First I’d just like to say a quick thanks to all of our writers and community members, and especially to those of you who’ve stuck with us since the beginning. You’ve helped make this a lovely place to write and read every week, and we’re proud to host your stories! Here’s to another 25 write-ins…
Without further ado, here is our winner, who will shortly be the owner of a £5 voucher for amazon.
Bernadette by Emmaleene Leahy
From the first line Emmaleene introduces us to a world that seems sinister and otherworldly, and she keeps up a theme of good and evil throughout, prayer and sinning. The religious overtones are really interesting contrasted with the cruelty inflicted on the main character, and you find yourself rooting for her. In that respect I was a little disappointed that the ending spells out her defeat so clearly: I’d have liked a little more ambiguity, but Emmalene is to be congratulated for conjuring up such a rich world and tapestry of relationships in a short space.
Please take a moment to read Bernadette and leave Emmaleene some feedback.
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